How hot is… ‘Shopping List’?

by Declan Heyse

reviewed by Reed James

Charles has been begging his wife to start a FLR (Female Led Relationship). It’s his dream, but Pamela has been resistant. Now she finally has given in. But instead of humiliating and spanking Charles, she sends him shopping.

As Charles heads out on his mundane task, he fantasizes about a world of female Domme’s just waiting to punish him in the grocery line. He bounces between his fantasies and the mundane world of shopping.

Shopping list is a well-written erotica with an interesting idea. Charles wants to be a slave, but his idea and his wives are far apart. He wants to be abused and humiliated, and while being made to go shopping is slightly embarrassing for him, he is lost in his imagining his perfect world.

The problem with the story is there’s no payoff. His fantasies are short interruptions into the real world and when he gets home and is finally about to be spanked, the scene fades to black and the story ends.

I give it 3 out of 5 dish soap. At only $0.99 cents ‘Shopping List’ will frustrate your eReader!

Available from Amazon. You can follow Declan on twitter @MrTungstn.