New Release: The Futa Biker’s Passion (Futa Bacchanal 5)

The Futa Biker’s Passion

Futa Bacchanal 5

My new futa release set in the Aphrodite Sisterhood Universe. All my futa stories take place in the same universe, with connections between them. Franny, Jewel, and Megan relationship started in Dorm Submission (Dominated at St. Futa College 1). Wild Wicked Menage can be picked up for $2.99 on Amazon, Amazon UK, Amazon CA, Amazon AU, Amazon FR, and Amazon DE!

futabacchanal5coverThe futa-bikers take on the heaving beauties of the bacchanal!

Ash is the newest member of the Aphrodite’s Devils MC, an all futa biker club. Their rivals have invaded their territory, and the Devils are ready to tangle. But when the futas arrive, they find a horde of beautiful, sexy women eager to be taken hard by the futas.

Ash struggles to control her desires as the sexy women swarm her. She’s surrounded by heaving beauties each eager to nurse the futas with their bountiful bosoms. But if the futas succumb to their desires, their rivals will win.

And Ash wants so badly to succumb and enjoy the beautiful women with her throbbing, futa passion!

But Franny, using magic to hide with Officer Luci, has a daring plan. But it will only work if she and Officer Luci can control their lusts and not get caught up in the wild bacchanal!

The Futa Biker’s Passion is a 6700 word futa-on-female, futa-on-futa, college, coed, oral, anal, menage, public sex, witch, magic, adult nursing, HuCow, group fun erotica that is not for the faint at heart.

A story of the Aphrodite Sisterhood Universe!

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New Release: Wild Wicked Menage (Futa Bacchanal 4)

Wild Wicked Menage

Futa Bacchanal 4

My new futa release set in the Aphrodite Sisterhood Universe. All my futa stories take place in the same universe, with connections between them. Franny, Jewel, and Megan relationship started in Dorm Submission (Dominated at St. Futa College 1). Wild Wicked Menage can be picked up for $2.99 on Amazon, Amazon UK, Amazon CA, Amazon AU, Amazon FR, and Amazon DE!

futabacchanal4coverFranny, a futa submissive, will have to use naughty magic to escape the bikers!

Franny, a futa submissive to the vivacious Megan, and her lovers are interrupted by a group of bikers following Dionysus. The bikers want to dominate and cure the futas, returning them to normal women.

Franny and her fellow futas don’t want that. With her magic, she manages to escape with the busty redhead Serena and a hot futa-cop. But to stay hidden, she and her two companions will have to share their passion. So long as they make love, they won’t be found.

Franny, the futa-cop, and the submissive Serena have a wild menage, hiding in plain sight as their passions explode through the night.

But Franny has no idea how she’ll rescue her futa-mistress and stop Dionysus’s bacchanal!

Wild Wicked Menage is a 6800 word futa-on-female, futa-on-futa, college, coed, oral, menage, public sex, witch, magic, titty sex, cremapie erotica that is not for the faint at heart.

A story of the Aphrodite Sisterhood Universe!

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New Release: Angel’s Innocent Bride

Angel’s Innocent Bride

Angelic Harem 5

When Michael, an angel, is cast out of Heaven because of love, he falls to earth. Under the guidance of a naughty demon, Michael gathers a harem of sexy women while a sinister, government agency hunts him down! You can buy Angel’s Innocent Bride for $2.99 on Amazon, Amazon UK, Amazon CA, Amazon AU, Amazon FR, and Amazon DE!

angelicharem5coverA young innocent woman discovers love and passion in the fallen angel’s arms!

Fawn is an innocent, religious girl grappling with her sudden plunge into lesbian sin. Believing Jeanette, Michael’s human wife, is possessed by a demon, Fawn vows to exorcise the librarian.

But when Jeanette arrives with her angelic husband, Fawn discovers what she has always been searching for. In Michael’s arms, she surrenders to her passions and lets the angel take her hard for the first time!

But the government is on the hunt for Michael. Jeanette is under their suspicions. The naughty librarian will have to tread carefully with the beautiful Agent Elizabeth Walsh or she’ll find herself and Michael captured and imprisoned.

Love, passion, and danger burns around the fallen angel and his harem!

Angel’s Innocent Bride is a 8400 word angel, demon, supernatural, paranormal, harem, oral, exhibitionism, voyeurism, masturbation, first time, sinful seduction erotica that is not for the faint at heart!

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How Hot is ‘Futa Night Nurse Book 1: Awakening’

How Hot is ‘Futa Night Nurse Book 1: Awakening’?

by Isabella Beluccia

reviewed by Reed James

B01BNOYIOA.01.LZZZZZZZConnie is a young nurse, about to turn twenty-five this very evening. She’s looking forward to celebrating with her lesbian partner, the beautiful, Asian Nanami. But Connie’s life is turned upside when her mother tells her the family secret: after tonight, Connie may turn into a futanari.

A woman with a cock.

Not sure what to believe, Connie comes home and has a hot romp with her beautiful Nanami. The pair share a hot and heavy passion. And then it happens. Connie transforms. She is a futanari. And she and her girlfriend are about to discover just how hot that is.

This story is a great futa story. From the over-sized members, to gallons of semen being squirted everywhere, it is Japanese Hentai come to life on the pages. The sex is hot and descriptive and while the plot lacks, who cares.

It’s a hot futa tale!

Only problem, the fact that she’s a nurse doesn’t play any role in this story. But here’s hoping the sequels brings that particular kink to the story!

I give it 4.5 of 5 gushing futa-dicks! At $2.99, ‘Futa Night Nurse’ will transform your eReader and give it one wild experience!

You can buy The Haircut from Amazon, Check out Isabella Belucci’s Amazon Author page for her naughty reads, like her on Facebook,  and follow her on twitter @BelucciAuthor!

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Publishing Erotica Part 6 – Rewrites and Editing

Publishing Erotica Part 6 – Rewrites and Editing

Click here for Publishing Erotica Part 5 – Writing Erotica

So, still hanging in with me? Good, writing erotica is the fun part. No were heading into the tedious area—rewrites and editing. Now this is the most important step in any writing. Your rough draft is called rough for a reason. It will be littered with grammar and spelling errors. You have all sorts of bad habits that will show through in your text and while you can unlearn them, they love to sneak in.

First off, rewriting is the polishing of the story. Grammar is secondary in this stage. Don’t ignore the grammar. If you spot a mistake, correct it, but your primary concern is the story flow, does it make sense, and will people understand what you are saying.

That one is important.

You know what you’re saying, but do others. Let’s take the example of two women having sex. Amy and Miranda. They’re fooling around, and now things have progressed to cunnilingus. “Amy licked and nuzzled at her pussy, licking through the pink folds, savoring her excitement flooding out.” You know that Amy is not licking her own pussy, but because you used Amy followed by the pronoun her, it muddies the water. Is Amy licking her own pussy? The reader can figure out the context, probably, but it might take them a moment to blink and reread what you wrote.

And that will take them out of the story.

Concise, clear text is important. Make sure your pronouns are right. Make sure what you’re writing is anatomically correct or possible. Pay attention to your dialog tags. Ask yourself if the reader should be able to figure out who is talking. If not, put an “Amy said” in it.

Polishing your story is what you’re doing with your rewrites. Making it say what you want and how you want it. But try not to spend too much time on this stage. You’re writing erotica, not a literary masterpiece. Now don’t be offended. I love writing erotica. I put effort into creating engaging characters and scenario, but I don’t delude myself that I’m nothing more than a pulp writer.

But that’s okay. You’re here to entertain not philosophize.

If you let your doubts or your perfectionism overtake you, you might never get out of the rewrite, editing stage. Spending hours and hours tweaking your story won’t matter if no one reads it because you are not satisfied with its perfection. And erotica readers are far more forgiving of minor mistakes (not major ones) than other genres (like romance). If you have someone who can read over the manuscript for free, a beta reader, and can correct little mistakes, great. Beta readers are wonderful. They get to read your hot erotica, and you get a free set of eyes to look over your manuscript.

It’s a win-win.

No you’re probably wondering why that’s important. “I know my grammar,” you say. “I’m an English major with a filthy imagination. I know the rules inside and out.” And you probably do. But there are limits on self-editing. Thanks to a wonderful phenomenon called pareidolia.

Are brains are amazing. They are powerful pattern recognition computers. They take what are eyes see (a series of still images) and translate that information into a seamless, moving world. Your brain fills in a lot of gaps. It makes assumptions, logical assumptions, about what it sees. Because your brain is a pattern recognition machine, it sees shapes in random noise: clouds, a stain, patterns of a tortilla chip.

It is also what lets us read. Our brain doesn’t actual “read” every letter in a word, often just figuring out the word by the first and last letters then guessing on the context to supply the correct word. You can remove all the vowels and still probably read what is written. Your brain can even miss doubled up words (the the) and only see the word written once. And its worse when you’re the author of the work. You know what you meant to write was “their” instead of “there” so your brain will read what you meant not what you wrote.

The key to self-editing is to combat pareidolia. To shake your brain out of the familiar. There are a number of tactics you can use.

    1. Word Search: The more you write, the more you learn the same mistakes you do over and over. Thanks to modern technology, you can search for every instance of “there” in your manuscript and double-check if it should be “their” or “they’re.”
    2. Reading Backwards: Start at the last paragraph of your story and read it through from the beginning. Then move up to the next and so on. This breaks up the story and helps you see the structure.
    3. Changing the Font: If you change the font from what you type in to a differnet font, something that might even be hard to read, it again disrupts the familiar and makes it easier to read.
    4. Print the Manuscript: Reading it on paper is different than reading it on the computer screen. I also have found reading it on my Kindle fire is helpful for editing versus on my computer screen.
    5. Voice-to-Text: Listen to your story being read out by a computer. This one I find the most useful for me, personally. Hearing the text being read helps me to spot missing words (there should be a “the” there or an “a”). It also helps you know if you have commas in the right spot, because the voice should pause there or not. There are funny quirks that happens, but you’ll learn to adapt. I use Natural Reader Free on my PC. Every 1000 words or so (I haven’t quite figured out the exact amount) it pops up an add asking you to buy the full software. But you can click it away.
    6. Grammar Programs: I have used ProWritingAide.com on my longer works (my novellas) to help clean up my writing. There are other sites like Grammarly and Hemingway App that do the same. The programs will identify passive voice, adverbs, redundant words, cliches, poor diction, missing quotes, missing punctuation, inconsistence capitalization of words, and more. It makes mistakes, so make judgment calls on all its suggestions, but it can help you improve your writing and stop making the same mistakes you didn’t even realize you made.

The last thing you need to do is learn your grammar. When do you use commas, how to use semicolons (try not to), the difference between affect vs effect, everyday vs every day, anymore vs any more, on to vs onto, in to vs into, lay vs laid (this is a fun one), then vs than, etc. There are lots of great grammar sites out there. Read their articles, absorb the rules and the shortcuts to remember them. Work on one problem at a time. Maybe you use too many adverbs, so work on that for a while until you think you’re better. Then move onto another problem. Join writing groups, post in forums, ask questions.

Never be afraid to ask a question. No one will think you’re an idiot. Every writer has made mistakes. English grammar and language is a complex beast.

You’re writing will improve as you create more and more erotica (or other writings). To be successful at short-form erotica will necessitate a lot of writing. So you will have lots of time to improve your craft. Do the best you can and know that erotica readers are there for the hot story and not for perfect grammar. But if you do publish anything longer than, say, 10k, spend more work on the editing and rewrites.

Click here for Part 7 – Formatting the Interior

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New Release: Futa Desire Submission (Futa Bacchanal 3)

Futa Desire Submission

Futa Bacchanal 3

My new futa release set in the Aphrodite Sisterhood Universe. All my futa stories take place in the same universe, with connections between them. Franny, Jewel, and Megan relationship started in Dorm Submission (Dominated at St. Futa College 1). Futa Cop Delight can be picked up for $2.99 on Amazon, Amazon UK, Amazon CA, Amazon AU, Amazon FR, and Amazon DE!

futabacchanal3coverThree innocent, young women are eager to surrender to the futa’s desires!

Serena, Lita, and Niobi are ready to be taken hard for the first time by Megan, the futa-mistress. Each of the three young women is keen to become Megan’s submissive lover for the college school year.

Franny and Jewel, Megan’s submissive futas, are eager for sloppy seconds. The innocent Serena is in for a surprise when both futas take her hard at the same time. Serena discovers true joy and hopes she is chosen to be Megan.

But the followers are Dionysus are ready to spoil all the futas fun. They want to return the world to where it used to be and return the futas to normal women. Women eager to please men!

Futa Desire Submission is a 6400 word futa-on-female, futa-on-futa, biker, college, coed, Domination/submission, oral, DP, first time, menage, public sex, exhibitionism erotica that is not for the faint at heart.

A story of the Aphrodite Sisterhood Universe!

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New Release: The Triad and the Innocent Maidens

The Triad and the Innocent Maidens

A Fantasy Erotic Novella

The Triad and the Innocent Maidens is set in an erotic fantasy world I’ve created! It is a world of monsters, magic, and naughty sex. If you’re a fan of pulp sword & sorcery mixed with erotica, then you’ll enjoy this tale! You can buy The Triad and the Innocent Maidens for $2.99 on Amazon, Amazon UK, Amazon CA, Amazon AU, Amazon FR, and Amazon DE!

triad1coverA young witch, a nubile thief, and a mighty paladin brave dangers to rescue the innocent maidens!

Fiona, a young witch with a destiny, is out on her first adventure with Aoifa and Seamus, her new spouses. The three have been sworn to protect the mountains against the kobolds, wargs, and other monsters. When Fiona learns that an evil warlock has gathered innocent maidens for a dark ritual, she vows to save them.

But only if she can drag her husband and wife from their naughty fun. Seamus and Aoifa are more interested reveling with the sexy and beautiful villagers they rescue. Seamus enjoys the intimate favors of hot wives and sultry barmaids. Aoifa is eager for whatever illicit fun with man, woman, or monster she can find!

Fiona will have to work hard to keep her spouses in line and focused on their mission!

This 21,000 word Fantasy novella contains hot and sexy situations such as: hot wives, cheating, cuckolding, monsters, first time, centaur, group fun, menage, magic, witches, supernatural, creampie, voyeurism, exhibitionism, and more! This naughty tale is not for the faint at heart!

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New Release: Futa Cop Delight (Futa Bacchanal 2)

Futa Cop Delight

Futa Bacchanal 2

My new futa release set in the Aphrodite Sisterhood Universe. All my futa stories take place in the same universe, with connections between them. Franny, Jewel, and Megan relationship started in Dorm Submission (Dominated at St. Futa College 1). Futa Cop Delight can be picked up for $2.99 on Amazon, Amazon UK, Amazon CA, Amazon AU, Amazon FR, and Amazon DE!

futabacchanal2coverMegan and her harem of submissive futas and innocent coeds encounter a sexy, futa cop!

Franny, one of Megan’s submissive futas, is eager for the fun of tonight. Three innocent, nubile girls to play with, all eager to be chosen by Megan. But when Megan’s speeding car is pulled over a by a futa cop, a new game is played.

Officer Luci is not happy about catching Megan speeding, but enjoying one of the innocent girls, like the redheaded Serena, would go a long way to cutting Megan slack. But the dominating Megan is not about to give into the futa cop’s desires.

Megan has a wicked idea, and Franny will find herself thoroughly enjoying the futa cop’s thick baton!

But while the futas are having their fun, their enemies, a group of alpha male bikers, plot to spoil it.

Futa Cop Delight is a 6900 word futa-on-female, futa-on-futa, cop, college, coed, Domination/submission, oral, anal, creampie, rimming, menage, public sex, exhibitionism erotica that is not for the faint at heart.

A story of the Aphrodite Sisterhood Universe!

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New Release: Innocent Futa Submission (Futa Bacchanal 1)

Innocent Futa Submission

Futa Bacchanal 1

My new futa release set in the Aphrodite Sisterhood Universe. All my futa stories take place in the same universe, with connections between them. Franny, Jewel, and Megan relationship started in Dorm Submission (Dominated at St. Futa College 1). Innocent Futa Submission can be picked up for $2.99 on Amazon, Amazon UK, Amazon CA, Amazon AU, Amazon FR, and Amazon DE!

futabacchanal1coverA futa submissive is eager to hold tryouts for her mistress’s new servant!

Franny loves being a futa submissive, serving her beautiful classmate Megan. Now starting their senior year, Franny and her fellow futa submissive Jewel, are eager to find an innocent coed to serve Megan in the final year of college.

They have three candidates: the busty redhead Serena, the lithe Lita, and the exciting Niobi. All three girls are eager to be taken hard by a futa for the first time! Franny, Jewel, and Megan explore the innocent girls nubile bodies.

The three girls experience hot bliss at the futas hands!

While Franny is excited for a night of fun, the god Dionysus, jealous of the futas, has recruited a group of tough bikers to spoil all their fun. Once again, the Aphrodite Sisterhood clashes with followers of the other gods!

Innocent Futa Submission is a 6600 word futa-on-female, futa-on-futa, Domination/submission, BDSM, piercings, first time, oral, anal, menage, exhibitionism, voyeurism, magic erotica that is not for the faint at heart!

A story of the Aphrodite Sisterhood Universe!

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New Release: The Devil’s Pact Part 24 – Sexy Stewardess Delight

The Devil’s Pact Part 24

Sexy Stewardess Delight

The Devil’s Pact is a long, mind-control erotic story! All Mark wanted was to get laid. He had no idea the pandora’s box he opened when he sold his soul for three wishes: A long, healthy live; unlimited sexual stamina; and the power to control people with his words! Horny Nun Seduction is available for $2.99 at Smashwords.

thedevilspact24coverMark and Mary head to New York City and enjoy a pair of sexy, married stewardesses!

Mark and Mary fly on their private jet to New York City, serviced by a the sexy Monique and her sultry friend Lize. The two married women are eager to cater to Mark and Mary with their nubile body and busty charms. And more naughty fun awaits Mark and Mary in New York City when they come across a young bride on her honeymoon.

Mark and Mary can’t resist enjoying the bride!

But Mark and Mary’s enemies maneuver in the darkness. Brandon Fitzsimmons hunts for the same book to gain the power to destroy Mark. In France, Brandon comes face to face with the Mother Superior of the nuns warring against Mark.

Sexy Stewardess Delight is a 24,000 word mind control, harem, domination, submission, oral, anal, creampie, menage, hot wife, bride, cuckold, rimming, stewardess, supernatural erotica that is not for the faint at heart.

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